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But if passion can be a product of brain cells then why can't God? Both can only be felt and not seen....right?
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artisticsolution wrote:But if passion can be a product of brain cells then why can't God? Both can only be felt and not seen....right?
Well, belief in God, a sense of God, and so on could be, indeed are, a product of brain cells (plus the surrounding society of other collections of brain cells and what they have constructed - places of worship, holy books and the like). But that would not entitle us to claim that God existed. Passions are a different kind of thing. A claim that they exist does not imply a claim that anything beyond the natural exists.
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Earth

Our star drives the water
across thee
salted no more
sucked from the sea
washed over lands
cleaned to replenish me
I stand in wonder
gaze across fields of green
yet I stand unfound
subtle as a tree
I breathe its air
I feed its sea
Like you
I'm nothing but pleased
Feel me?
Do you?
A soul is?
Untrue?
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He IS the light...

Did you know that light
is not always bright?
It comes in frequencies
to delight
Radio, x-ray, infra
but a few
We know little of His hue
Take an atom
cut it down
proton, electron, neutron
a little more
quarks, muons, gluons
further you say
as far as time and light decay?
Mmm, now there's a thought.
Does it matter their different rate?
matter and anti-matter they do you know.
Since the big bang oh what a show.
If they didnt you wouldnt exist!
Now there's a reason to get pissed!
Yes lets celebrate and tolerate
Dont deviate and at Mass debate
Close your mouth when you chew on Christ
Hey! That's masticate!
So? To deviate?
Would it cause Him to cause your fate!???
Mmm, well i aint no conscious pilot
or am i?
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Why is a star when reversed rats
and can love be so evol
You cry and wonder why
and yet aspire to a steeple
This thing that is of us
a thing which you must trust
A love beyond thine eye
more profound than your or i
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We Are All Made of Stars

....some of us are STARS ...some of us are RATS.

...some of us gaze up and wonder.
...some of us look down and wander.

...but for the topic...definitly atomic!
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A Pen Smith
Anti Hemps
Ha Men Spit
Ha Temp Sin
Me In Paths
Am The Snip
Am The Spin
..........................I believe...(! v ¬ (this))
Am Ship Net
He Spit Man
He Tips Man
Man He Pits
Amp The Sin
Pa Sent Him
Sap Them In
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Hallo. Can I speak to my flow
Above
I've been waiting for this call and
I'm still at home
I open windows and my door
The whole night
Is bright
I see
Oh
We'll be agree
It's a tree of
My knowledge and my life
I believe.
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FRIEND TODAY (cyberpunk)

In this bar
i sit, i sip
i am an outsider here
I have no scar
camouflaged i am
sitting as they
sitting and sipping
avoiding the fray
Ive some load to move
a chip emmbedded
last runs hack
i was the jack
wheres my fence
the smoke is dense
i feel intense
switch to the implant
release the endorphins
heart rate recoils
now im back
another sip
warm smooth whiskey
double me, his_key
rolls down
its charm
as a fool
takes a hold,
he grabs my arm
switch blade
flicks out
pressed to his throat
his identity revealed
was his only hope
sit down friend
is what i say
you are mine
but only today...
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TURBO GIRL (cyberpunk)

She's small
streetsmart
over-cool
like at times
shes turbo
make any man
a fool
leave him standing
tranced at the lights
shes down the street
separating the fights
her eyes are driven
green at times
slicked back and silver
her dress thin lines
I had her once
upon an unfortunate
time
made me quiver
lose my mind
intercooler
chipped set
and smaller
faster
cleaner
efficient
and meaner
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Empty Canvas
Pour Yourself
Into it.
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Will you resist the temptation to disappoint me ?
I fueled my enthusiasm
or let it expand freely,
so that the result is clear
and there is no reasonable doubt left,
before I put you
into
a bloc of ice,
easy to handle
and
decorative.
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You want to put someone in a bloc(k) of ice?
The poem is intriguing for the ideas it sums up
What in a word/a few words is the poem about?
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More of my poetry here:- http://www.androcies.com


ENCRYPTED KNOWS DIVE

Snorting cyphered bits
encrypted knows dive
ride with me
sus me,
as Je sus IT
REAL_IT_Y
Why?
The pI in the sky?
Pi Seas
The final zodiac
riding the light
revealing the truth
the ultimate system
the ultimate clue?
If i sus the system
crack the code
reveal the Truth
move some load
see it as i c
logic is my T
REAL..IT..Y
the English LANguage
is more of a GAUGE
a LAN perhaps
i'll reveal its traps
part_Y? Y_trap?
U like to party?
go ahead
life is cheap
leep some time
have a sleep
the S is sin
wave that is
good buy
and die
what is Y
and what is U
U O Y?
you.
Embedded we are
evolved of IT
derived, convoluted
suckled from tit
If i could speak of
this 'system'
as it were
and answer a
quest.ion
white noise
a blur
thats where IT
came from
im on my knees
i am its spawn
i am in awe
that from chaos
i was formed
sorry for hating
sorry for scorn.
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