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Hi! I am reading mostly existentialism these days but am also keen on Freud, Marx and Lao Tsu. I am retired and living with my wife in Scotland. My main interest is haiku.
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Welcome Paul. Dive in. The waters lovely.
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Beware of danger.Paul Heinowski wrote:Hi! I am reading mostly existentialism these days but am also keen on Freud, Marx and Lao Tsu. I am retired and living with my wife in Scotland. My main interest is haiku.
Hostile forces lie within
Scotland is safer.
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Do you realise you have two lines to what could be a wonderful haiku here? You're just missing the middle line.uwot wrote:Welcome Paul. Dive in. The waters lovely.
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Words race through my headPaul Heinowski wrote:Hi! I am reading mostly existentialism these days but am also keen on Freud, Marx and Lao Tsu. I am retired and living with my wife in Scotland. My main interest is haiku.
And scatter like falling leaves
To write a haiku
Welcome, Paul.
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Welcome Paul. Dive in.ForCruxSake wrote:Do you realise you have two lines to what could be a wonderful haiku here? You're just missing the middle line.
No middle line. Never mind.
The waters lovely.
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Did I say "wonderful" haiku? Hmmm...? Funny's good, too.uwot wrote:Welcome Paul. Dive in.ForCruxSake wrote:Do you realise you have two lines to what could be a wonderful haiku here? You're just missing the middle line.
No middle line. Never mind.
The waters lovely.
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Waiting to read,
a very short poem Lest,
the mind wanders.
a very short poem Lest,
the mind wanders.